Mere maazi ne mere gham ke sahaare lekar,
Meri kashti ko duboyaa hai kinaare lekar.
Dhuaan hokar jo udey ashq in nigaahon se,
Wahi laut aaye hain aankhon men sharaare lekar.
Humein ho hasaratein saama-e-hasti ki kyunkar,
Kisi ko paa na sake chaand sitaare dekar.
Mujhe zindaa na samajhna ae guzarte logo,
Main firta hun mere khwaabon ki mazaarein lekar.
Khizaa ke zakhm hare hi hain abhi tak dilpar,
Yahaan se jald nikal jaao bahaarein lekar.
well
ReplyDeletei have heard 2 of these verses, r they ur creation? they r astounding!!
there r no other words which i can use to describe how ur poem feels
:)
regards
Paridhi
Thanx Didi...
ReplyDeleteYa its my creation...
i'm not sure about the uniqueness of all verses,or the ideas...
it happens that some verses/thoughts appear in many poems.
This was one of my initial ghazals...
you will find more authentic & unique ghazals with my signature style in this blog.
mai kya bataon dost tumne guljar ka stetement jaroor soon hoga ki bahta hua dariya aa raha tha ki ja rha tha?
ReplyDeletethis was the simplest one (to getting in my mind?) other poems words are dificult for me?
kuch khushi ke najm bhi to likhen!
mana ki jindagi udas hai but udas khud hin kisi ka das hai aur das ka malik kaun hai?
hmm. gehari baat kar di sir,
ReplyDeletelikhungaa zaroor ... pehle acche se mehsoos to kar ne do...
hehehe :D
thank you Ankesh.